If you have made presentations in the past, it is very likely that you have spent a fair amount of time thinking about ways to make it more engaging for your audience. I have grappled with this situation too. So when I saw a workshop on using storytelling in presentations, I registered for it. Here are a few things I learned.
The workshop provided practical tips to improve presentation content, delivery and brought forward two distinct styles for weaving stories into presentations. These styles emerged naturally during the impromptu presentations made by people in the audience and were not prescribed by our presentation coach Lynn Espinoza. Maybe that is why I found them to be more effective in communicating a message. Here are the two ways of using personal stories in your presentations to better engage the audience.
Use a single story to communicate the big idea:
This was surfaced in Carri Bugbee’s presentation on “Steps on writing for the Social Web.” Carri used the story of her new kitten, Bundle, who was initially intimidated by the unfamiliar surroundings and slowly got comfortable enough to initiate interaction with the big cat in the house. To communicate her message, Carri used images of Bundle quietly sitting in a corner, observing the big cat, lurking behind the big cat, taking steps toward the big cat and then finally playing with the big cat. Sitting in the audience, I couldn’t help but wonder how the simplicity of the message was perfectly suited to calm the nerves of a social media newbie. The images told the story and unfolded guidelines that would be easy for someone to remember and follow. The key challenge for using the single story approach is to ensure that the story can be carried through the whole presentation.

Bundle the kitten - The social media newbie.
Use multiple stories to communicate the big idea:
This was showcased in Bridget Pilloud’s presentation. Bridget is an ‘intuitive counselor’ and helps people view their life events in a positive light. She communicated the concept of having a positive outlook, by talking about her own personal stories. One of them involved getting a kidney stone removed. She showed the visual of a big kidney (it was an aesthetic image, unlike the image that is probably coming to your mind now) with her actual kidney stone on it and she described the event as being more positive than childbirth. She further elaborated that unlike giving birth to a child, she was happy that she did not have to care for the stone after it was out. This was her positive twist on an otherwise difficult life event. Stories like these are difficult to forget and the messages they deliver tend to stick. I doubt if I will ever forget what Bridget does for a living, even though my interaction with her was only for a brief impromptu presentation.
Another presenter used three incidents that happened to her just last week, to reinforce the importance of having a social network. She talked about how she found a videographer for a client, a barn for her engagement, and a Spanish translator for another client all via her social network and within minutes of sending out her requests. Her presentation did not have any visuals, yet at the end of it, people from the audience were offering to help her find more barns and discuss ways to build their social network. An effective presentation indeed. Our presentation coach pointed out that the challenge in using this approach was to manage smooth transitions between the different stories.
Finally the success of using personal stories to drive a message cannot be complete without mentioning Steve Jobs’ 2005 Stanford Commencement Address.
While I am looking forward to using these approaches for my upcoming presentations, I am curious to know if anyone else has used them and what their experience might have been.
Tags: Emotion, Presentations, Social Media, Storytelling


It’s a wonderful concept
I am surprised that story telling can be so universal in it’s application
when u have a presentation to make the message is usually predetermined, to create a story that will suit your message seems difficult to me, yet if this is possible as u indicate then I am very impressed and would love to learn to implement it.
Yes, you bring out a good point.
Our presentation coach gave some examples on how she does that. For example, to drive home the point that your own presentation (attire, etc) is very important, she talked about an incident where she had mud on her shoes and how her father refused to take her to a meeting, until she changed her shoes. So yes, to find stories around your message you might have to dig a bit deeper. But overall the effort seemed worth it.
Good reading!
Sometimes stories – personal or otherwise takes people into different context and ‘bringing them back’ would require good skills. Any resonating thoughts !?
Also what sort of stories one should pick and what we should avoid? I am active with toastmasters. Many people avoid talking about their stories and start narrating somebody else’s stories and quotes. Any reflections !?
Regards,
Ishwar
Very well written article! I have no doubt how weaving stories into your presentation to drive your point home can be effective and I have attended a few such presentations at various conferences. However, the only drawback of these are the slide decks themselves when distributed ‘as is’ as handouts… what is so effective while being presented with the person bringing in the necessary content and emotion in the form of verbal content, presentation style and personality becomes completely ineffective as a handout. These are the presentations I would want to share with my colleagues and these would be the most difficult to comprehend sans all the other good stuff that went with it. I guess for such presentations, it would be great to have a slightly different slide deck that includes the interesting visuals that relate back to the stories but have some additional content in the handout version.
Ishwar,
‘Bringing them back’ could definitely be an issue with storytelling or for that matter even interactive presentations. The key, I think is to master the skill of always being in control of the presentation. It may require fine tuning your ability to sense when you are loosing control and then regaining it back. We did some impromptu presentations and saw one example of this where the presentation because a big discussion and lost focus. Regarding selecting the right stories, I think the key is to 1) find stories that are relevant to the context and audience 2) focus on the key message you are trying to make. If you look at the example of Steve Jobs presentation, it is super personal but extremely relevant and effective.
It’s great that you are an active member of toastmasters. Maybe you can apply these techniques and share your learning’s with us…hopefully they are success stories.
Malini,
I have had similar issues and found my answer in another presentation given by Rashmi Sinha. She is the creator of Slideshare and talked about, trends in presentation format, based on views/popularity on Slideshare . The first and most important one was the move towards ‘visual essays’, big images and two to three words of text. While some of the advantages were similar to storytelling, we discussed the disadvantage of distributing those presentations. The way Slideshare is taking care of that is 1) providing presenters the option to add audio 2) Including ‘notes’ in the presentations, so that the audience gets the context.
I thought that the ‘notes’ idea was a good one and could potentially fill the ‘context’ gap that visual essays create. Now, only if presenters start taking the time to add these notes.